| Mine and *rlkirkland's first renga. Work in progress. |
| Mine and *rlkirkland's first renga. Work in progress. |


You won't read this poem...you won't read this poem I will never write itYou won't read this poem...
I realised when my bike was stolen that walking takes you closer than riding a bike driving a car flying a plane
hearing the crunch of my shoes on gravel beholding a clouded sky back lit by the full moon pausing to touch the bark of a birch
smelling snow flakes the first ones this year to stay for a while
the cold air clears my mind as every
smoking breath condensing on my glasses obscures my vision
yet my focus of expansion


Djoseph's clich submissionSwe:Djoseph's clich submission
dubbelliv
=
halvdöd
Eng:
double life
=
half dead


Autumn Drizzle - Aki sigurestill falling in the trees autumn drizzleAutumn Drizzle - Aki sigure


Cut out to killMan was not cut out to kill, not meant to murder. You must be remade. Cut out toCut out to kill
fit
the
form,
trimming off what stands out. It will not do to get caught on the barbs of conscience when
you need to choose when you've got orders when you're pressed when you're afraid and you know you wont get away, by choosing not to choose. A moments hesitation,
and
he
will
choose for you. And when the choice is made, when one is torn and another one ripped to s


Theme 11: MemoryWhen the bus stopped I looked out over green fields of barley and suddenly felt like running my hands through the ears.Theme 11: Memory
But I remained in my seat leaving a memory waving at the stop knowing it would be wading through emerald waves without me.


Theme 1: IntroductionAfter meeting her IRL my worst apprehensions were confirmed: I had mistaken courtesy forTheme 1: Introduction
interest, kindness for love, empathy for passion and her relaxed disposition
for a covert seduction attempt but worst of all I had mistaken her for her avatar


Theme 26: Tearsour paper bodies flutter and flail blown about by the winds of life and death tearing at our corners unfolding folds that we made to stabilise to keep our shapeTheme 26: Tears
our paper souls brittle and frail threatened by the fires of love and hate singeing our corners ungluing glue that we used to affiliate to be ourselves


Theme 30: Under the RainWhen you mourn the rainclouds never ask you why rain have fallen long before your tears relish in the fact that no one else can see you cryTheme 30: Under the Rain
It is pointless to look for answers in the sky the heavens are brandishing their spears When you mourn the rainclouds never ask you why
You are far from the only one to cry do not all men still carry childish fears? relish in the fact that no one else can see you cry
Broken hearts can heal again if you just try and a still small voice will reach your ears When you mourn the rainclouds never ask you why
Afte
| 101 themes that in the end will equal 101 poems. |


The Story of Your CharacterThe Story Behind Your Character: Writing a Believable Back-storyThe Story of Your Character
What makes you you?
Its not your physical appearance. Undoubtedly, you look like someone, whether you inherited your parents high cheekbones or you find your long lost doppelganger on the bus. So its just as silly to describe your characters as blonde and beautiful as it would be to describe yourself as such when someone asks you to define yourself.
What really defines you and shapes your personality is the sum of all the cause and effect situations in your life, your personal history, your back-story.
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玉
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People are Important - Goals much less
When we stop learning we have begun to die - Shamelessly Purloined
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ARS BREVIS VITA LONGA
R.I.P Larry Norman 4/8/1947 - 2/24/2008
"Achieving perfection in anything takes at least two lifetimes"
"When..." [link]
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玉
I don't need to fav it again btw. If it's faved once it stays that way. If I could I would.
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ARS BREVIS VITA LONGA
R.I.P Larry Norman 4/8/1947 - 2/24/2008
"Achieving perfection in anything takes at least two lifetimes"
if you go read it again right now - like right after you read this comment - I think I can safely say you'll be reading the absolutely final version.
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玉
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Thank you sooooo much for the feature, and for the kind words!
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ARS BREVIS VITA LONGA
R.I.P Larry Norman 4/8/1947 - 2/24/2008
"Achieving perfection in anything takes at least two lifetimes"
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