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A waking night's haiku

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Literature Text

Eng:

Vision penetrates
the double-glass reflection
winter where I stand


Swe:
Jag ser igenom
tvåglasfönstrens reflektion
vinter där jag står
My first submission in a hundred years! Yahoo!

It probably does not make sense (not even to me, I guess...) and I'm quite sure that dimondie will jump at me when she sees this. But I'm willing to take that risk. ;)
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Yeah, hate to say it's not your best work but it's true. I'm sure you could of found more descriptive words that still hit the basic rules. But I read what you meant by it (in your comments) and now it makes all the more sense. (even though that sentence didn't) If you worked on it, the thought process sounds great for it.