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November saijiki contest entry

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pitter-patter...
on my umbrella
at the bus stop
imagining myself
a Totoro
Edit: Actually added the wikipedia link. :P

Entry for the November saijiki contest over at the haiku club :iconthe-haiku-club:

Read more about the contest in the clubs journal here: [link]

Also check out the other contest on sonorous sounds: [link]

Form: Tanka
Region: Sweden, Europe, northen temperate zone
Season: Autumn/winter
Category: The sky and the heavens
Kigo: pitter-patter I made this one up myself. Pretty much describes the whole autumn/winter shift here and, I suppose, in many other countries too. Probably exists a traditional one much like it.
Description: The sound of rain. In this case on an umbrella in particular.


For those unfamiliar with Totoro this wikipedia article [link] will clear things up. Read it, and then watch the movie. :aww:
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Jade-Pandora's avatar
:eager: wow most excellent - placing Second Place for your Tanka - congratulations, oh tall & fuzzy fellow haijin!