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pitter-patter...
on my umbrella
at the bus stop
imagining myself
a Totoro
on my umbrella
at the bus stop
imagining myself
a Totoro
Literature
Hie Hence
Hie hence, lest ye be dispatched.
Literature
2010
'07
What did I tell you in 2007?
The celebration of time together now done,
Bent on leaving, unwilling to stay,
Behind your childish eyes.
I told you not to go.
Rhetoric patriotic riotic feud poured
From a hormone-fueled mouth,
As you promised me, the tree,
our class, king country, and God
That you would return safely.
You promised us you would not die.
'08
I reasoned with you, I begged you,
But you went anyway.
Maybe it was the figure you cut
in uniform,
Maybe it was the red blood blood-red
rhetoric already half false,
Maybe it was a mind half rotted,
finally cracking under the pressure of a consta
Literature
Virginal Year
It feels like poetry for a new beginning:
Running in slow motion,
Laying a fresh path in the
Tentative first snow of a virginal year.
Your hand shapes a safe home in which my
Shivering fingers nestle;
You sow a field of forgetting
Over the weary road behind.
Untouched and unafraid, this
Unfamiliar unconditionality, this
Darkness so vivid, this
Uncertainty so certain.
We build that which is
From that which we were.
In the sanctity of our year,
In the unwritten and pure,
You and I are as new in this moment
As ever we have been.
We are here.
We are now.
We are.
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Edit: Actually added the wikipedia link.
Entry for the November saijiki contest over at the haiku club
Read more about the contest in the clubs journal here: [link]
Also check out the other contest on sonorous sounds: [link]
Form: Tanka
Region: Sweden, Europe, northen temperate zone
Season: Autumn/winter
Category: The sky and the heavens
Kigo: pitter-patter I made this one up myself. Pretty much describes the whole autumn/winter shift here and, I suppose, in many other countries too. Probably exists a traditional one much like it.
Description: The sound of rain. In this case on an umbrella in particular.
For those unfamiliar with Totoro this wikipedia article [link] will clear things up. Read it, and then watch the movie.
Entry for the November saijiki contest over at the haiku club
Read more about the contest in the clubs journal here: [link]
Also check out the other contest on sonorous sounds: [link]
Form: Tanka
Region: Sweden, Europe, northen temperate zone
Season: Autumn/winter
Category: The sky and the heavens
Kigo: pitter-patter I made this one up myself. Pretty much describes the whole autumn/winter shift here and, I suppose, in many other countries too. Probably exists a traditional one much like it.
Description: The sound of rain. In this case on an umbrella in particular.
For those unfamiliar with Totoro this wikipedia article [link] will clear things up. Read it, and then watch the movie.
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wow most excellent - placing Second Place for your Tanka - congratulations, oh tall & fuzzy fellow haijin!